Year 4

2016-2017

Mr Stink Character Description

October7

Mr Stink STANK!!  It wasn’t his fault, he couldn’t have a shower like you and me.  Now, every time someone walked past, they nearly died.  Strangely, Mr Stink carried a dog, Duchess, who had black fur and she had a horrible stench, worse than Mr Stink. Mr Stink looks posh, sounds posh and has a dog, so I think he used to be posh, even though he had mouldy sausage and rotten egg stuck in his beard from ages ago.  Mr Stink ate from the rubbish and his dog ate wrappers that people let go of.  Mr Stink is actually a snappy dresser in his red bowtie and his disgusting brown jacket.  However, the faded colours and pockmarked material gave him away. Back at the rusty bench, Mr Stink was just sitting there with Duchess barking madly and rapidly.

 

by Molly Hayes

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2 Comments to

“Mr Stink Character Description”

  1. October 10th, 2016 at 12:34 pm      Reply Steph Hayes Says:

    Good description Molly! Mr Stink’s dog is a bit like our dog, Lexi, always eating wrappers!!


  2. December 8th, 2016 at 2:36 pm      Reply Emily Shannon Says:

    Well done Molly!


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