Year 4

2016-2017

Mr Stink Character Description

October7

Mr Stink stank. Almost unbelievably, you could smell him from the other side of the Pacific Ocean. His beard was crusty and it had mouldy sausage and egg in it. He was a snappy dresser in his red, dirty, old bowtie and jacket. He had a dog called Duchess. He didn’t have a stench like Mr Stink. Mr stink lived on an old wooden bench with Duchess for company. Duchess was a black dog with a red collar.

Mr Stink Character Description

October7

Mr Stink STANK!!  It wasn’t his fault, he couldn’t have a shower like you and me.  Now, every time someone walked past, they nearly died.  Strangely, Mr Stink carried a dog, Duchess, who had black fur and she had a horrible stench, worse than Mr Stink. Mr Stink looks posh, sounds posh and has a dog, so I think he used to be posh, even though he had mouldy sausage and rotten egg stuck in his beard from ages ago.  Mr Stink ate from the rubbish and his dog ate wrappers that people let go of.  Mr Stink is actually a snappy dresser in his red bowtie and his disgusting brown jacket.  However, the faded colours and pockmarked material gave him away. Back at the rusty bench, Mr Stink was just sitting there with Duchess barking madly and rapidly.

 

by Molly Hayes

Mr Stink Character Description

October2

Never in my life have I met a tramp as smelly as Mr Stink. He wore a tweed jacket and a bow tie. His beard had mouldy egg, cheese and sausage in it, and it was so tangled! It  had its own smell. He had a dog a called Duchess who had a smell, she was a minute black dog. Some people would try to talk to Mr.Stink but he stunk so bad people would go running off whilst dropping a couple of pounds at his feet.

Taylor W

Mr stink character descriptions

October2

Mr stink had a super bad stench! He was a tramp, he only had a shower once a year and he lived on a bench. He had a little dog called Duchess. It is the the smelliest dog ever. He had a beard with bits of mangled sausage and cheese in it. He was quite a snappy dresser with his bow tie and tweed jacket which had gone scruffy over time.

Josh H

Mr Stink Character Description

October2

A mile away, you could smell Mr Stink. He was the stinkiest stinker who ever lived. Curiously, he never leaves the bench, it’s like he owns it. In spring, he killed all the flowers and lots of animals because of his smell. Wherever you go, you could smell him and your eyes water from it, even if you were from the other side of the world. Constantly, people would go by using their T-shirts as gas masks.

Mr Stink Character Description

October2

Slowly, Mr Stink sat down on his bench whilst people ran past dropping coins at his feet, hoping he would have a bath or shower but he didn’t. Mr Stink was a lonely man; he had no friends because he stank. It wasn’t his fault, he was a tramp after all and you could smell him from the other side of the Pacific Ocean! There was nothing as smelly as him accept from his beard; his beard was full of mouldy bread.

Jayna W

 

Mr Stink Character Description

September30

Daily, Mr Stink stank. Wherever he sat, there was a stench, a horrible stench. Mr Stink had a dog who goes by the name Duchess, he is a special dog because he has his own special smell. Festering bits of old sausage, egg and mouldy cheese were tangled in Mr Stink’s beard.

Mr Stink Character Description

September30

I saw a man over there called Mr Stink and he stank. Nervously, I started walking to him whilst other people ran past him holding their noses. He had a big, brown and dirty beard and a small dog called Duchess. He wore a pock-marked tweed jacket. He was quite a snappy dresser, don’t you think?

Mr Stink Character Description

September30

Below the clouds, there lived the stinkiest stinker that ever lived so they called him Mr Stink but no one had any reason to say it. His beard was full of manky sausage and rotten egg that was left over from his past. Every day, he sat on the same rickety old bench with his minute black dog called Duchess. She wasn’t any breed of dog. People dropped a few coins at his feet before,running off with their eyes watering.

 

Rowan

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Mr Stink Character Description

September30

Over there was a man named Mr Stink, he stank more than a stench. He lived on a bench down on an old field, after all, he was a stinky old tramp. He was an unusual man because he did not live in a house and he slept underneath some dirty leaves. He had a festering beard with dirty pieces of egg and old sausages. He had a tatty old dog called the Dutchess.

 

by Ethan F

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